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I think I finally created something Critique worthy ;_;

I like it.
for yew =ShadowedDoom, we have dolls of our besties 030

Lily an scar ar both small Small FTW!
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Hiya nifteh. So my thing about this is that the shadings just too heavy. It's too black and too present, really. It makes them look like they're burnt. The attempted fur texture doesn't really help this, because that makes even the parts that aren't heavily shaded look singed. Scar's face is too dark and you can't see her expression, her scar (at least I think that's a scar) is weirdly shaded and has no depth to it (scars indent). I'm sure you know the proportions are very wrong, but I guess that's your style. One thing about that though - their noses are so small compared to their hands, and face shapes it makes them look like mice. Also, their back feet have toes but their front ones don't so that's a lack of consistency. Another lack of consistency is that the scarf is sort of shiny *coughdogetoolspamcough* but none of the other fabric on anybody is. And the figures of Cindrar and whoever the other one is *tribblefail* aren't very defined, and it took me a while to even notice they were there. I think this is, again, a biproduct of the ridiculous shading.

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